I totally agree with them on the crits, I really should have made some of the harder lines a little more flattering. I make no excuses because had I spent more time those things would've been worked out. But I really should've left the collar...that was just dumb on my part. Either way, #5 out of over 100 entries and props from Joe Jusko (a lifelong hero of my brother and I), can't go wrong with that at all. Check it out on Project Rooftop.